Beauteous Forest Vavroovahana Patra

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    Beauteous Forest Vavroovahana Patra

    Post by Noctis on 2012-01-18, 23:45

    Beauteous Forest Vavroovahana Patra






    Beauteous is the forest;

    In summer provides oxygen.
    Tranquilises creatures minds, provides peace, merriment.
    The forest is beautiful, mother’s shrine smiles in the forest, devotees
    are delightful.

    Beneath the trees shade passers-by rest a while, chilly breeze kisses
    The passers-by gaudily;
    Passers-by enchant peacefully.
    Poets rest a while, depict beauteous poems enthusiastically;
    Inhale pure oxygen gladly.

    The green forest is a Gift of Almighty;
    In all poets mind provides peace, gaiety.
    Poet depicts the Eternal Truth of life;
    Provides peace in human minds, evaporates grief.

    I pray my mother Sarala Daily;
    Mind derives perennial peace cheerfully.
    Chanting hymns I derive peace;
    Singing mother’s devotional songs derive bliss.

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    Re: Beauteous Forest Vavroovahana Patra

    Post by Across on 2012-01-18, 23:59

    Nice poem noctis, flows really well together.

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    Re: Beauteous Forest Vavroovahana Patra

    Post by Elegant Dawn on 2012-01-19, 17:51

    Cute, and elegant. :3

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    Re: Beauteous Forest Vavroovahana Patra

    Post by Utada Hikaru on 2012-01-20, 07:30

    i liked the ending, a very well pleased poem to read. Smoothing.

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    Re: Beauteous Forest Vavroovahana Patra

    Post by Balthier on 2012-01-24, 03:10

    gorgeous poem, i like it as well. it's calm and smoothing.

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    Re: Beauteous Forest Vavroovahana Patra

    Post by Noctis on 2012-01-28, 22:23

    thanks for the lovely comments.

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    Re: Beauteous Forest Vavroovahana Patra

    Post by Riku_Keyblade on 2012-03-25, 06:58

    it was sorta short to me, wish it was longer but i liked it, idk why I'm just reading it.

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